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Last week I announced that TIGHT SPACES was finished. That ended up changing as I edited the final scene and wasn’t satisfied with it, but it didn’t take long to rewrite the scene so that it fit the story better. So, it is, indeed, finished. All but one thing.
TIGHT SPACES NEEDS YOU!
There’s only one problem left. My cover artist, Timothy White (keep watching here for more on him) gave me two versions of the cover to choose from. I LOVE them BOTH! Every time I think I’ve decided definitely which one to use, I end up changing my mind. So, with time running out, I need help deciding. That’s where YOU come in.
Tomorrow, Sept 3, I’ll reveal both versions of the cover. I need YOU to tell me which version you like best, and help me decide which to use! I’ll announce the decision on Friday, Sept 7.
Now, the part you’ve been waiting for…
This week’s Six is from the beginning of the last scene. There was another confrontation with her ex just before this.
Jesse stood, tucking Amy in close against his side before she could move away. “I will. Thanks, man.” Turning, he kept Amy close and led her toward her car. “Now, tell me the truth. Are you okay?”
Next week’s Six will be from later in the final scene.
Don’t forget, stop by tomorrow to help decide which version of the cover will be The One, and find out when you can get TIGHT SPACES!
What a smoothly written piece. It encourages the reader to continue turning the pages. Nicely done!
Jess Schira recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday: Fools and Runts 17
Thanks, Jess! That really means a lot to me.
Kenra
Kenra Daniels recently posted..Kenra Daniels’ #SixSunday Needs You!
I already know he cares about her. Great six!
Krystal Shannan recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday #18
Thanks Krystal! Yeah, you know it, but she hasn’t quite figured it out yet, lol. She’s too afraid of looking desperate to let him know she wants more than one night with him.
Kenra Daniels recently posted..Kenra Daniels’ #SixSunday Needs You!
He sounds very protective.
Kristal Baird recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday September 2nd 2012
Hi Kristal! He is a bit more protective than a guy planning a one nighter would be. It’s a good hint he wants more
Kenra Daniels recently posted..Kenra Daniels’ #SixSunday Needs You!
Not my scene, but nicely written.
Sue Ann Bowling recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday
Thanks Sue Ann! It means a lot to me that you like the writing, even though stories about this kind of situation aren’t your thing.
Thanks,
Kenra
Kenra Daniels recently posted..Kenra Daniels’ #SixSunday Needs You!
Ooh I want to know the truth – is she ok? Great job!